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Webcomic first impression by LatinNewYorker Webcomic first impression by LatinNewYorker
Just the finished color job of the first page of my The Homeheroes webcomic. Will add text boxes and speech bubbles later.

When I first inked it, I used a simple ballpoint pen, and hated the result after scanning it. So I re-inked it using a liquid ink pen, and after some two hours coloring and fixing some traces with GIMP, this is the result.

Decided to post it before officially uploading the complete work so you all could tell what you think about it, give advices etc.
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:iconmalort75:
Malort75 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Professional General Artist
Is magnificent!
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:iconlatinnewyorker:
LatinNewYorker Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:bow: Many thanks, bud!
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MintyMousyXFCE Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Simplesmente espetacular, os quadros estão bem fluente e coloridos de acordo com o tempo (de noite).

Talvez os textos pudessem ser um pouco melhor trabalhados, já que está um tanto difícil lê-los com estão.

Mas meus parabéns! Mal posso esperar pra ver as próximas páginas! Por um momento pensei que o nosso amigo estava atrasado por causa da patroa. XD.
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LatinNewYorker Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Na verdade, os textos aqui são só uma referência pra eu ter uma ideia de onde posicioná-los. Garanto que o resultado final está bem melhor de se ler. ;)

Muitíssimo obrigado, maninho! :) Bom saber que aprovou!
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MintyMousyXFCE Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
De nada, apesar de ser apenas uma página de testes, o resultado está surpreendente!
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X-P-T-Z Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
HAHA! Curti a página! Sinto comédia misturado com assassinato vindo por aí :giggle:
:idea: A dica que eu deixo é... faça as páginas um pouco maiores. Se esse é o tamanho máximo da página, sinto dizer que não ficou muito bom. :( Não digo usar número maior de panels, e sim um tamanho de página maior. Quadrinhos "oficiais" devem ser feitos em tamanhos semelhantes a de uma folha A4 ou maior - para que, caso venha uma grande oportunidade de publicá-la numa revista, se tiver que dar um stretch na hora da impressão, que seja para diminuir (mantendo a qualidade). Só essa dica :p

O resto tá de boa! :la:
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LatinNewYorker Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Bom... não sei se está falando da visualização - porque, de fato, decidi usar uma opção menor de visualização máxima ("800 pixels wide") na hora de enviar essa página. Mas se não é isso, me explica melhor que eu não posso deixar passar essa dica. :)
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X-P-T-Z Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Bom, se o desenho que ficou pequeno ao postar, então... nota-se que manteve uma qualidade muito boa. Então provavelmente sua página está com um tamanho bom (inclusive para impressão). :)
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LatinNewYorker Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:dance: Bom saber!
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Demon-Without-Horns Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A very cool looking first page pal ^^ You certainly went through a lot of work for it and I have to say it turned out exceedingly well :3 For someone who doesn't do many backgrounds, your street scene looks wonderful. Especially with the lighting on the streetlamps ^^ Setting a very good mood there. The panicked looking character is amusing too XD
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LatinNewYorker Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:dance: Great to know it, man! Thanks tons! :) In fact that street scene was the hardest part, both to fix and color. Glad you approved it! :aww: Well, glad you approved this preview in overall! :)
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Demon-Without-Horns Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very welcome ^^ I believe that from all the detail that went into it X3 You did well ^^
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:iconivan-elterrible:
Ivan-ElTerrible Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012
It finally begins. I like this preview, can't wait to see the final work although it will be astonishing
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:iconlatinnewyorker:
LatinNewYorker Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:giggle: Glad to hear that, man! It's a strong motivation! :)
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Ivan-ElTerrible Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
I don't want to look like an impatient reader but, I can't wait to see how this continues!
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:iconlatinnewyorker:
LatinNewYorker Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No worries! As a matter of fact, most of my focus is redirected to do this. =D ;)
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:iconivan-elterrible:
Ivan-ElTerrible Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
So can we say there are more pages approaching?
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:iconlatinnewyorker:
LatinNewYorker Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep! :nod:
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:iconivan-elterrible:
Ivan-ElTerrible Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
:iconthemizplz::iconsaysplz:AAAAAAAWESOOOOOOOOOOME!!!
:iconheavyplz::iconsaysplz:INCOMIIIIIIIIIING!
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:iconlatinnewyorker:
LatinNewYorker Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:XD:
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ACPawz Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What's fat guy carrying the stool supposed to be? Sorry, I can't tell. :XD:
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:iconlatinnewyorker:
LatinNewYorker Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You'll understand when it is complete, and with the story following as well. ;p
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ACPawz Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YAYNESS.
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CheshireCaterling Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012
So far I'm really liking it...a bit dark but that may be the mood you're shooting for here. I'll reserve any further judgement for when I see the finished product ^_^
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LatinNewYorker Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, indeed I want something pretty dim for this first part, to try to give it a "melancholic-after-midnight" mood. I'm pretty glad to know you approved it so far, pal! :aww:
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